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Trista's avatar

Love the story❤️

Here’s mine. Sorry if formatting is weird. Wrote it on my phone in the backseat.

The Mural

The girl walks, shoulders slumped, feet dragging, confidence shattered after yet another stinging critique from her art professor. She think he’s the embodiment of the phrase: those who can’t, teach. As far as she knows, he has never given any student in her class a mark above a B. She’s convinced he lost his passion so he’s trying to crush theirs.

If it wasn’t for a stoplight, she would’ve completely missed the bright blue mural with the exact message she needed right in this moment. Art is good for you. It makes her remember the smiles from friends and family when she’s presented them with her art as a gift.

Ever the art student, she takes the sketchbook from her bag, mind already forgetting that she’d been on her way home. She crosses the wrong street, though it’s the right street for her, and makes herself comfortable underneath the word good. And she creates.

*****

The man hasn’t finished writing anything in years, rejection after rejection shattering his creativity long before the young writers of this time were even born. Ideas have abandoned him. He still tries. He sits on his balcony a few times a week, preferring the scritch-scratch of his pencil on paper over the click-clack of computer keys.

Some days an idea will spark but quickly turns to embers. Some days he ends up with doodles and nonsense he can’t decipher even though it came from him. Nothing sticks. But he perseveres anyway in hope one day, something will.

Today is different. When he steps out on to his balcony, bright blue catches his eye. Art is good for you. He’s not sure he can fully agree with the statement, at least with his personal art, but it brings memories of attending gallery openings and operas and street art exhibitions with his late wife. An idea sparks, he gets comfortable, and it blazes.

*****

The child can’t yet read but the pretty colours catch her eye. She’s been dancing down the sidewalk next to her mother, who’s pushing her baby brother in a stroller. She immediately asks her mother what the words say, but the child isn’t sure she understands. Art like pictures? She doesn’t like to paint. It’s messy. She can’t yet write many words, but she can write her name, her mother’s name, and now her brother’s name.

The child loves to dance. Her mother, with sad eyes, has told her they can’t afford dance classes like some of her friends’ parents, but the child doesn’t care. She makes up her own dances to any song that speaks to her. Is that art? Can she decide what is art?

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I love this prompt!! And your story! Thanks for this, Evelyn 😍😍

Another installment of Cookie & Drew made an appearance when I sat down to write ❤️ Little longer than five minutes, but I couldn’t help it! 😍😍

Cookie nervously chewed her bottom lip, a habit she’s had since childhood. All the intrusive thoughts swirling around in her mind. The what if game her anxious mind conjured anytime she attempted something new. The newness of this moment just so happened to include a handsome man. Picturing Drew in her minds eye brought a small sigh to her lips and quelled the worried chewing briefly. The thoughts couldn’t be quieted as easily.

What if he doesn’t show up?

What if something happens to him?

What if I got the dates wrong?

What if he changed his mind?

She looked back through her texts with him, finding reassurances in the sweet messages he sent her. He was definitely interested in her. She could scarcely believe her good luck when he asked her to meet for a coffee and walking date. He’d said he wanted to show her his favorite place in the city. She couldn’t say no.

She chose a table by the window so she could watch for him, as soon as he walked by she tapped the glass. He looked up at her and smiled, she swooned and tried not melt into the chair. Who needed coffee when her heart was racing so fast she could feel it through her t-shirt.

She stood to greet him and he wrapped his arms around her, giving her a squeeze. He stepped back and nodded appreciatively at her, she blushed and he blushed. They shared a low chuckle.

“Coffee?” he asked.

“Yes, please” she replied.

They walked together to the counter, placed their orders and waited. After coffees in hand, Drew took Cookie’s free hand and tugged her outside.

“Where are we going?”

“You’ll see.”

They chatted about their days and sipped their coffees. A few blocks later and he tugged her hand again to slow her down.

“Close your eyes please,” he said.

“Mmm, but I’m holding coffee and your hand, how will I walk? she worried.

“I won’t let you stumble,” he promised.

Closing her eyes, she sighed heavily and smiled. Just when she thought she was going to trip, he stopped and told her to open her eyes.

Directly in front of them was a beautiful hand painted mural in a stunning blue - her favorite shade, and the lettering spelling out Art Is Good For You was a perfect shade of yellow outlined in red, making it bold. Art does that for us, emboldens and brings us hope.

She had tears in her eyes when he faced her.

He knew she understood now why this was his favorite place. She grabbed his hand and squeezed it as the tears fell. No one had ever shared with her something so simply beautiful.

The truth is art IS good for you and now they have a shared favorite space.

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