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Mesa Fama's avatar

Awwwwwww this was so dang sweet!! Here's my little piece conjured up over a little longer than 5 minutes, but I couldn't help myself :)

I don't normally write fiction, but this all popped into my head! I've been daydreaming about writing a fictional story and your churro with chocolate was a great way in! Thanks Evelyn! <3

Cookie spied the street vendor with the flashing neon sign, “CHURROS” called out to her as she wandered aimlessly along the sidewalk. What had she been thinking about just now? Oh, right, happier times. So few and far between these days. Maybe a churro will usher in a moment of joy.

The vendor had eyed the pretty brunette heading his way, she seems so sad. He willed her to look up at him, he couldn’t make out all her features, but he could tell they were delicate punctuated by a slightly pouty mouth. Just as he started to look down, she looked up and they locked eyes.

“Who is that?!” Cookie thought to herself.

“Who is she?” the vendor thought to himself.

They both timidly smiled at each other as she continued her approach.

Everyone else had disappeared.

Cookie gave a little wave and shyly walked up. “Hi” she said. Clearing his throat, seems a frog had gotten stuck there in a matter of seconds, “hello” he returned.

“May I have one of your churros? They smell divine” Cookie asked. *Who says divine?*

“Of course, anything you want!” He exclaimed. *Am I being extra loud? What is happening to my voice? Why am I sweating*

Cookie started grinning more broadly and he felt the heat rise into his cheeks. He fumbled around trying to get the churro into the wrapping, muttering to himself about his own clumsiness.

Cookie found herself chuckling softly, she could relate to his fumbles and utterances, and she found him endearing.

He handed her the churro stick and asked “Have you ever dipped a churro in melted chocolate before?”

Cookie’s eyes lit up, “no, that sounds fantastic and exactly what I need right now”.

The vendor’s own eyes lit up at how excited she was to have chocolate. He handed over the little cup full of melted goodness. She instantly dipped the churro and watched the chocolate fill the sugary ridges and drip down the sides, her mouth watered in anticipation of the first bite.

Cookie looked back up and felt a little butterfly take flight in her belly. The vendor is quite handsome she thought to herself, dark wavy hair and kind light blue eyes, wait is that a dimple. She fought the urge to poke it and then realized she’d been staring, and he was staring just as intently at her.

“Thank you so much for making this day better.” she said as she turned to leave.

Suddenly remembering she hadn’t paid she turned back and met his gaze once more, “how much?”

“For you, anything.” He responded. *Wait that’s not right, she asked how much, as in how much to pay*

“Sorry?” She inquired.

“Um, no charge for you today. You said you needed it, so it’s on the house” he sheepishly replied.

“You don’t have to do that, thank you though.” Cookie decided to leave a tip and as she went to drop a ten-dollar bill into his cup, he stopped her and touched her hand.

They both jumped at the contact and then laughed.

“I’m not usually this awkward I swear,” Cookie said giggling.

The vendor decided to take a chance. It had been a weird day full of serendipitous moments, he took this as his sign to leap.

“I’m Cookie” she said bravely, holding out her hand that wasn’t covered in sugar and chocolate.

“I’m Drew” he said and took her outstretched hand in his own. The thought repeating in both their heads - this is exactly what they both needed right this divine moment.

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Trista's avatar

So cute! Now I want to snuggle my nephews and eat churros. Or watch them eat churros because they steal whatever sugary thing I try to eat.

Here's mine:

First and Fair

Charlotte, or Charlie to her friends and to the boy walking toward her, sits at a picnic table. She’s not sure if the flush she feels is from the heat of the sun or from butterflies at the idea of her first ever date. An afternoon at the state fair might not seem like a dream first date to a lot of people, but to Charlie it’s perfect. Her date’s plain black shirt and jeans doesn’t stand out in the sea of people enjoying the fair’s offerings but Charlie has no trouble following his path through the crowd.

Jacob expertly avoids elbows, bags, and running children as he makes his way to the picnic table Charlie has commandeered for them. The smell of the cinnamon and chocolate from the churros and cup in his hand mingle together and make his stomach growl. He stops just short of the table, placing the container of churros in front of Charlie so he has a hand free. Before she can reach for one, he snags one, dips it into the cup of chocolate in his hand and offers it to her.

The smile on her face is worth not having the first bite.

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