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Kate Hawkes's avatar

Thank you for the great op to just write!! so much fun.

Gefjun

The woman sighed looking at the bullocks in front of her, endlessly pulling the plough to nowhere. She too was stuck, frozen in motion, the view to her right never changing and the squawking voices of the parade of tourists rattling in her ears often out of view to the left.

How had this happened, she wondered for the millionth time? How had she been convinced by some hansom, big-moustachio'd, sharp-eyed artisan to be the model for a Goddess in a fountain? That was it, she recognized - again. Goddess. Myths and legends. What was not to fall for?

The bullocks didn't care, they were happy stuck in place pulling nothing. She, on the other hand, wanted to be free! What is the point of being a Goddess if you're stuck in place, with no say over your future?

She had heard there was a group of 'Women Against Iconography'. She took that to mean, overhearing some heated discussions at the foot of her fountain, that when women are put on pedestals, even in honor, it diminishes them. Setting them above human aspiration and feelings, means they are in danger of falling into disrepute.

Furthermore, those statues of old, continue to affect women today as men long for the good old days - whores, mothers or goddesses. Wishing she could drop the whip, sit down and maybe even have a nap, the Geflin/Goddess/Model was pulled from her usual hopeless reverie by the noise of raucous shouting and a rattling truck - or was it - was it?

Unable to turn her head she could only hope and sure enough rumbling in on her right, a massive military fighting vehicle with turrets and all. It stopped and out popped 3 fierce looking Danish women. Harking back to their Nordic roots these modern Valkyries had nothing to lose in the fight for female equality.

Shouting their slogan 'Valkyries Forever' they aimed the long-nosed fat gun directly at the fountain with the Goddess and bullocks. A whistling sound careened toward her with a flash of light and smoke. The last thing she heard was 'Free The Women' as she shattered into a million free-flying pieces.

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Trista's avatar

I love that picture! And relate to Andrea a lot. I still want to live in a castle. I want a huge round tower that's a library with a spiral staircase.

Here's mine:

A Child's Wish

Isabella, Bella to her family and friends, can’t remember when she first became obsessed with the castle-esque old church. Maybe it was from all the walks her mother used to take her on, walking past the church almost daily. Also daily, her mother had to call her name or take her hand to get her to continue walking until she could no longer look back and see the church. Each time, she swore to her mother that she would get married in that church in the biggest, poofiest dress, and each time she mother smiled at her and told her “of course, Sweetie.”

Her love of the church was well-known among her peers. She had even done a school project on its history. In high school, her boyfriend set up a scavenger hunt for her that ended at the church with a prom-posal. Of course, she said yes. They even took prom pictures on the nearby bridge and Bella thinks it’s the best she’s ever looked – until today.

She’s standing at the back of the church, dressed in white, and even with all the pews between them, she can see the tears in her fiancé’s eyes. They match her own. Through the years, her vision of her perfect dress changed, less poofy, more fitted, more dramatic, less dramatic. The one constant was the church.

She’s still not sure how Aleister managed to get permission for them to have their ceremony at the church. When she’d inquired about it, the day after their engagement, she’d been told the church is no longer in use and therefore, unfortunately, her request had to be denied. She’s not sure if she even wants to know how he did it. It feels more magical for it to be a mystery, like it’s always been meant to be for her.

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